Thoughts

Possibilities displayed now Displeased with choices left and right Adversities direct the bow Pisces bossy soul take your flight Beauties not necessarily Abilities blessed; family Accessories to use; gaily Activities bounce to daily__ Finis' A form called a Lento The starting word of each line rhymes It has several end rhyming scheme but this one is the simple abab, cdcd

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Robert Johnson

Date: 4/2/2013 4:47:00 PM

I'm thinking, I'm thinking. :)

Jack Horne

Date: 3/31/2013 3:16:00 PM

lovely write, Sara - looks like a fun form too

Christine Phillips

Date: 3/31/2013 12:17:00 AM

Nice piece!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/30/2013 2:18:00 PM

This is good Sara; I enjoyed it. Thanks and have a happy Easter with family. Lucilla

Donna Jones

Date: 3/28/2013 9:16:00 PM

Great job Sara.....Donna

David Fisher

Date: 3/28/2013 6:17:00 PM

This is interesting and puts a new spin on things for sure. Will have to dig deep in the mind to make it work out, but from the looks of your poem, certainly worth it.

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/28/2013 6:59:00 AM

This is an awesome poem even if it is not complete! From what I have read so far it is a spectacular write my friend! That must be extremely difficult to rhyme the first words and also the last words! What a fun poem though, I'll have to try it someday! Great Work!!