Thoughts

Possibilities displayed now
Displeased with choices left and right 
Adversities direct the bow
Pisces bossy soul take your flight 

Beauties not necessarily
Abilities blessed; family 
Accessories to use; gaily
Activities bounce to daily__ 

Finis'

A form called a Lento
The starting word of each line rhymes
It has several end rhyming scheme 
but this one is the simple abab, cdcd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Johnson Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 4:47 PM
I'm thinking, I'm thinking. :)
Horne Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 3:16 PM
lovely write, Sara - looks like a fun form too
Phillips Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 12:17 AM
Nice piece!
Carrillo Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 2:18 PM
This is good Sara; I enjoyed it. Thanks and have a happy Easter with family. Lucilla
Jones Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 9:16 PM
Great job Sara.....Donna
Fisher Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 6:17 PM
This is interesting and puts a new spin on things for sure. Will have to dig deep in the mind to make it work out, but from the looks of your poem, certainly worth it.
Sivey Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 6:59 AM
This is an awesome poem even if it is not complete! From what I have read so far it is a spectacular write my friend! That must be extremely difficult to rhyme the first words and also the last words! What a fun poem though, I'll have to try it someday! Great Work!!
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