Thoughts

Possibilities displayed now
Displeased with choices left and right 
Adversities direct the bow
Pisces bossy soul take your flight 

Beauties not necessarily
Abilities blessed; family 
Accessories to use; gaily
Activities bounce to daily__ 

Finis'

A form called a Lento
The starting word of each line rhymes
It has several end rhyming scheme 
but this one is the simple abab, cdcd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 4/2/2013 4:47:00 PM
I'm thinking, I'm thinking. :)
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Date: 3/31/2013 3:16:00 PM
lovely write, Sara - looks like a fun form too
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Date: 3/31/2013 12:17:00 AM
Nice piece!
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Date: 3/30/2013 2:18:00 PM
This is good Sara; I enjoyed it. Thanks and have a happy Easter with family. Lucilla
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Date: 3/28/2013 9:16:00 PM
Great job Sara.....Donna
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Date: 3/28/2013 6:17:00 PM
This is interesting and puts a new spin on things for sure. Will have to dig deep in the mind to make it work out, but from the looks of your poem, certainly worth it.
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Date: 3/28/2013 6:59:00 AM
This is an awesome poem even if it is not complete! From what I have read so far it is a spectacular write my friend! That must be extremely difficult to rhyme the first words and also the last words! What a fun poem though, I'll have to try it someday! Great Work!!
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