John Castro Poet Rhyme

Thoughts

Thoughts are like fish in a brook                                                                                   
Ideas swimming upstream
Confused by the worms on a hook 
Boggled by life's dreams

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Zzzzz Zzzzz May 3, 2011 at 1:53 AM Some thoughts can be like that. But we can have nice, easy thoughts too. Interesting write.

Carolyn Devonshire February 28, 2011 at 8:39 PM Indeed, this sounds like the struggles we encounter in life, John. Well said! Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson February 28, 2011 at 5:01 PM Great little verse you have there, John. Thanks for your enthusiastic comment. Glad I found you. Love, Joyce

John Castro February 28, 2011 at 1:57 PM lol thanks doc just having fun;)

Dr.Ram Mehta February 28, 2011 at 1:50 PM Nice analogy you have penned well, john