Debbie Duncan Poet Dramatic Verse

Thoughts

In the silence of my thoughts
I hold you close within my heart.

I shall  never let you go
I always want to feel you close.


Our love  is a true love.
Our  love  is a fated love

Though some people may
Try to pull us apart.

I think we should never 
let this happen.

It is written on the  wind
That we were meant to be.

We should never let the words
of another pull us apart!
 
Our love is true and binding
Our love was truly meant to be
Our love is written in the stars!

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Duke Beaufort March 22, 2017 at 5:20 PM Letting go is particularly difficult for me too. I have only just begun to understand how to do it after suffering for so many years with this inability. The funny part is that it just happened all of a sudden. I don't really understand it, but I was in a stress class as part of work and it triggered something. We're supposed to share our worst moments to enable them to become memories and not threats.

Poet Destroyer A July 6, 2013 at 10:49 PM :-) enjoying your Featured Poem of the week. take care and have yourself a great coming week. xox~ LINDA" Debbie Duncan July 7, 2013 at 12:38 AM Thank you Linda ,,,, you have an awesome week as well ;}

Karen Anglesey July 4, 2013 at 2:25 PM Hi Debbie, just found this on the Featured Poem of the Week ... a lovely and kind hearted romantic verse..:) Debbie Duncan July 4, 2013 at 2:56 PM Thank you Karen ;}

Skat A July 4, 2013 at 10:08 AM DEBBIE, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. have a nice 4th of July. *SKAT Debbie Duncan July 4, 2013 at 10:14 AM Thank you, happy 4th to you ;}

Gordon Mcconnell July 3, 2013 at 3:20 PM really lovely write Debbie,superb work and really moving piece, well done, God bless, Gordon Debbie Duncan July 3, 2013 at 3:46 PM Thank you Gordon ;}

Poet Tacito July 1, 2013 at 10:23 AM Nice to see this get featured on PS. I deeply enjoyed how in depth these feelings went in these lines. Debbie Duncan July 4, 2013 at 10:15 AM Thank you Drake ;}

Jimmy Anderson January 8, 2011 at 7:26 PM Nice love poem...Jimmy Debbie Duncan July 4, 2013 at 2:50 PM Thank you Jimmy ;}

Dr.Ram Mehta January 8, 2011 at 5:09 AM Lovely write on the passion of love... it is written on the wind that we were meant to be,,, nice exporession. Debbie