Thoughts

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Thoughts Jump Dance round Jive, jumble Inside my brain's ruts. My cranium's cogs, and those gears Move, organize, store, discard until condensed retained

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/22/2024 8:04:00 AM

such a flowing string of words and thoughts about how our brains process. Well crafted, Sara K. Have a splendid day, Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/22/2024 8:10:00 AM

Sara B, Yes, I did string them together didn't I. Maybe that is how my brain works. LOL..Sara K

Howard Kerr

Date: 1/22/2024 6:23:00 AM

Hello Sarah, I’m most impressed by this very lively, energetic, expressive representation of this (relatively) pitfall strewn poetry form. Fascinating flow, well crafted. Your reviews of Pearl-Eyed Riser and Long Winter Stretch are cherished by me Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/22/2024 7:54:00 AM

Whoa!! Glad you were impressed. Thanks for the visit. Sara K