Thoughts

my thoughts of you 
are petals
floating slowly in the wind
coming to rest 
on reality`s cold hard waters
desiring only the bud from whence they came
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Kitso Avatar
September 25, 2008 at 11:24 PM
lovely piece and definately thoughtful!!!
Lakhera Avatar
September 21, 2008 at 12:34 AM
Lovely images. Must say that the thoughts are very beautiful. Love Chitra
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September 19, 2008 at 1:30 PM
Much said in this concise poem. Nice use of imagery to forward your thoughts. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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