Thoughts

Thoughts commenced  in me
like a train of rain drops.
Tried I to make them alive
But scattered they,hither and thither.

Disturbed me again
like thunder and storms.
Tried I to make them ablaze
but they seemed locked in a cellar.

Mind,the thriller of life
longed to get hold of it.
Thoughts the creator of love and hatred
galloped away from it.

Minutes and hours it suffocate me
days and weeks it strangulates me.
Months and years it questions me
now i have an answer for them.

Those who can make their thoughts alive
are more bestowed in life.
For life,come out of them
like lava erupting from an volcano!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Krutsinger Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 1:22 AM
It is true that those who make their thoughts come alive are bestowed in life, but ah, those who can re-claim their feelings, life comes erupting out of them! Well done, Nisha.
Memoir Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 6:23 PM
Thank You Caren .Your encouraging words mean a lot to me.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace