Thoughtless

Thoughts in my head
Take shape,
Change color,
Grow wings,
And Fly-
Leaving me behind.
I'm left blind
And thoughtless.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 1, 2012 at 6:07 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Priya. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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April 29, 2012 at 5:53 AM
Well done Priya, like your verse. Have a lovely day. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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