Thoughtful Ride

These thoughts of mine
Jump from the branches
And weaves of my mind
Cruising on my breath
Erratic and fleeting,
 Unleashed and bewildered
Yet plummeting the mark
Its the debris i  confront,
With a sigh and a laugh
The reins in my hand
O Lord do be kind
Do guide this horse and carriage
To Thy stand-- 





(c)copyright-vijay nair
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 24, 2013 at 5:33 AM
Vijay--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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August 28, 2013 at 7:15 PM
enjoyed your poem tonight, warm thoughts, Ralph
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August 26, 2013 at 11:02 AM
Vinjay, a very thoughtful one indeed.. thanks for sharing...LINDA
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