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Poetry/Verse/Thoughtful
Copyright Protected, 10-1585-167-11
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, October 11, 2023
For the Internatinal Contest, How Are You Feeling Today
Sponsor, Silent One, Judged 10/15/2023

First Place

The Poetry of Exile—James Joyce, Rumi & Adrian Rice — Steemit

Thoughtful

 
"my thoughts take me back to my sorrows- and I face each and let each go"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Andresen Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 1:35 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Constance :) -
La France Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 10:03 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the congratulations, appreciate.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 1:43 PM
That's the best way to do Constance. I clap my hands to this poem and something we all should do. Well done. Congratulations on the winning. Hugs
La France Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 10:05 AM
Maria, thank you so much for the nice comment, compliment and congratulations, appreciate and hugs.
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 10:55 AM
you did your one line superbly, Daar Heart
La France Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 10:05 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate
Murray Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 8:47 AM
Perfect way to make your way back to serenity Constance. Lovely line.
La France Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 10:05 AM
Jean, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, appreciate.
One Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 8:04 AM
Best thing as we can't carry our sorrows around as they weigh us down.. Hope you feel better today.. Congratulations on your win in the contest.
La France Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 10:07 AM
Silent, thank you so much for the contest, comment, compassion and compliment, appreciate. I am trying to face the past, sometimes I am able to vanquish a memory but they have a way of creeping back, so I face them again, what else can I do ...
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 7:59 AM
Your one-liner verse is stunning, Constance. It expresses a lot from our lives. You Are brave!
La France Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 10:08 AM
Mala, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, appreciate, love.
Andresen Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 9:46 AM
- Sad ... but, if you can let go ...and let the thoughts fly - GL :) - hugs
La France Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 10:38 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the comment, and encouragement, appreciate and hugs.
Shines Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 8:42 AM
short ,sweet ,thoughtful and deep.Thank you so much sharing.Have a great day!
La France Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 10:38 PM
Kenisha, thank you so much for the lovely comment, appreciate.
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