Red Fiery Poet Free verse

Thought of You

I started drifting away from myself
saw myself changing, 
heard my own heartbeat.
HOW long does it take to reach you ?
My mind kept tossing over the deep blue sky.
I feel intoxicated by your words.
passion is running deep into my blood.
once again I learned to smile.
once again I learned to live.
when you said,little bird fly

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John-Ovan.P. Hull March 12, 2016 at 9:57 AM You sound like a very passionate person and you convey that beautifully through your words.

Laura Breidenthal September 9, 2013 at 3:47 AM Your words are all aflutter! Beautiful words I must say! Always, Laura

Dan Kearley August 29, 2013 at 12:51 AM You learned to smile...You learned to live. Just beautiful! :o)

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu August 16, 2013 at 10:16 AM Expressive and on point.

Poet Destroyer A August 16, 2013 at 2:08 AM good morning Red, glad you found yourself. a nice way to spread your wings and fly... luv...linda

The Situation August 15, 2013 at 11:56 PM A master rapper he must be.

Christine Phillips August 15, 2013 at 10:44 PM A very nice calm and soothing poem. Nice work

Jack Ellison August 15, 2013 at 7:53 AM Love it! Love it! Love it! So sweet, dear lady... more please! Warm hugs xoxox

Richard Lamoureux August 14, 2013 at 8:15 PM Well it seems you have rediscovered your voice. This is beautifuly written. Ride the wave of inspiration you never know where it will take you. Good job Red it is good that your passion for writing has returned to you. Red Fiery August 14, 2013 at 8:16 PM Speechless

Donna Jones August 14, 2013 at 6:46 PM Very beautiful Red...

Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2013 at 12:27 PM - Thank you ... this is sweet and beautiful, Red. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito August 14, 2013 at 10:00 AM This is my 1st time reading your work and I'm pretty impressed. I can deeply relate to these lines. Gorgeous & well said. One can only wonder if their thoughts are the same. Great job!