Thought of the day

soul knocks at heart’s door in the dead of night 
hoping we will dance in childlike delight
whether we do or not is up to us
the fortunate quickly board God’s bliss bus
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March 4, 2024 at 7:54 PM
The imagery in is striking, US! The soul knocking at the heart's door in the dead of night – it speaks to that inner voice urging us to embrace joy. The choice to "dance in childlike delight" is powerful. Your eloquent poem captures that feeling of seizing the moment and finding happiness. Thanks for sharing this thought-provoking piece! - Blessings, Daniel
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March 4, 2024 at 8:02 PM
So happy you found value in these words, dear Daniel
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