Thought of a Tear Drop

as i m sitting here promising my fate 
looking down and tear drops are falling from my face
what went wrong
i dont know
i was snatched
by the fainted thoughts,high and lows 
as cold wind passing through my body
i know i was trapped
by tragic visions
i am sorry
i ruined all expectations
i could have been a good son
i dont know why i went mad
i owe u and i always say
I LOVE U DAD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 10, 2012 at 5:44 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Priyabrata. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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