THOUGHT I SAW AN ANGEL

Searching for clarity,
relief and release,
I long for a spirit
to confirm internal peace.
I long for a blanket
to shelter my needs,
as do all the people
walking down all the streets.

But, I thought I saw an angel
walking down the avenue.
Stop, I silently begged,
I have need of you.
Lately I’ve been confused.
I don’t know what to do.
Could I please borrow
some comfort from you?

Through rain I followed her
down that dim avenue
and my heart held forth
its need for a clue.
I could be sitting in a cafe
on a perfect, sunny day
and still I would hope
that angel would look my way.

The vision turned, candy bar in hand
and I saw another human
who struggled to understand.
Still I wanted to hug her,
show her something grand,
give her some sort of sign
that for one desperate moment,
to me, she had been divine …
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 6, 2016 at 12:42 AM
CayCay, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
Callus Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 3:16 PM
I believe in heavenly angels, CayCay, but there are also those angels who live among us and who influence our lives positively. A lovely poem and a worthy win!! ~ Regards // paul
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January 3, 2016 at 11:27 PM
NICE WIN
Scars Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 3:56 PM
Hi Lovely lady!! This poem is amazing, as all of your poems are :) You are very talented CayCay...God bless!! *smiles* *hugs* *congrats* -luloo
Mcloughlin Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 3:33 PM
Hi CayCay, beautiful poem, perfect moments are gifts from God. Congratulations. Love, Jean
Johnson Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 1:50 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
Cheema Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 11:47 PM
Congrats for that beautiful inspirational poem! I agree with Robert!
Tor Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 10:09 PM
Love your angel write CayCay. Congratulations!
Negron Flores Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 8:39 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest CayCay.
Negron Flores Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 1:31 PM
Excellent poem.
Nehls Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 8:00 AM
Hi CayCay. I believe that angels do walk among us and the come in many packages. I also believe that God will use us in many ways if we are open to it. One or two words to a lost soul or simply a smile can change a persons life if God is the divine force behind it. And we may, for one moment be that lost souls angel. All is possible with God, my friend.... Robert.
Godwin Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 8:41 PM
We are indeed angels to one another at any given moment and, most often, we aren't even aware of it. That is what the poem is about. Thank you, Robert ... CayCay
Ward Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 10:40 AM
Very moving... Thank you for sharing... Best wishes, Julia
Godwin Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 11:02 AM
Thank you so much, Julia, for commenting. This is one of my favorites so I'm especially happy that you could relate to it ... CayCay
Gifford Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 12:03 PM
I enjoyed your Angel poem, CayCay, I don't think I've read you before but hope to read more of you in the future. And I hope you will read one of my poems, too. ~~Darlene
Godwin Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 1:22 PM
I am tardy with this response. By now I have read a great portion of your poems, enjoying each and every one. This poem is one of my personal favorites from my pen, thank you for reading it. Blessings ... CayCay
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