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Thought For the Day When Gated

Had I a duplicate of mine I would surely go to town; Confusing all authority, I would boldly roam around. Were there a duplicate of mine I would surely see the A’s; Seeing all there is to see, I would satisfy my craze. If only there was a duplicate I would surely go today; Over looking all formality, I would enjoy the blessed day. My very first poem written 39 years back: Inspired by Yeats poem

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Date: 4/22/2009 8:11:00 AM
I am truly grateful to each and everyone for having read my first poem I had written when I was eighteen. The poem was published in the annual school magazine. Thanks to poetrysoup for it being featured here. Remembering childhood days is always nice.
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Date: 4/22/2009 8:00:00 AM
This poem is as meaningful today as it was 39 years ago. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. God bless you. Always, Dane
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Date: 4/21/2009 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations jai on having your poem featured this week. Vince
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Date: 4/20/2009 8:47:00 PM
Jai, Congrats on having your poem featured!
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Date: 4/20/2009 7:16:00 PM
Congratulations.... Love RKay
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Date: 4/20/2009 3:43:00 PM
Congrats on an excellent featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/20/2009 2:35:00 PM
God bless you. Congratulations on your being featured this week... Always, Dane
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Date: 4/20/2009 1:09:00 PM
Enjoy your day and your honor. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Written 39 years ago--wow--that's awesome. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/20/2009 9:10:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup, Jai and congratulations on your writing being selected to be featured this week!! I think we are all supposed to have a twin somewhere .. smile
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Date: 4/20/2009 4:31:00 AM
Hi Jai, congrats to you on your superb poem being featured this week! Cheers, Ernesto
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Date: 4/20/2009 3:08:00 AM
Jay, short but nice poetry. Congratulation. Mine is also featured this week. Ernilando
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Date: 4/19/2009 10:23:00 PM
Jai, nice work and congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 4/19/2009 11:49:00 AM
Jai - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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