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Thought Clouds...

Strange how thoughts evaporate like moisture hover in the clouded masses only to rain upon us continuously, until we finally soak in the messages...

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/24/2010 1:19:00 PM

Very well developed idea...An idea will hit me and it will float and eventually I will come up with a way to (hopefully) get the idea across..Like the one that I wrote called "Spiraling Universe" which floated for days as I tried to pull together a way to get it across..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/22/2010 5:28:00 AM

It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning Jay. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol

T.L. Drover

Date: 6/21/2010 1:23:00 PM

Wow. I can't tell you how relevant this poem is to my life today. Thanks for sharing, excellent use of words.

Malcolm Dyer

Date: 6/21/2010 12:26:00 PM

Good piece wish it was longer. Keep it up