Thought Clouds...

Strange how thoughts
evaporate like moisture
hover in the clouded masses
only to rain upon us continuously,
until we finally soak in the messages...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 1:19 PM
Very well developed idea...An idea will hit me and it will float and eventually I will come up with a way to (hopefully) get the idea across..Like the one that I wrote called "Spiraling Universe" which floated for days as I tried to pull together a way to get it across..Sara
Brown Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 5:28 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning Jay. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol
Drover Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 1:23 PM
Wow. I can't tell you how relevant this poem is to my life today. Thanks for sharing, excellent use of words.
Dyer Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 12:26 PM
Good piece wish it was longer. Keep it up
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