Thought

i don't see it all the time that reality which describes a reality topology of thought that gives rise to ideas that are as yet unproveable abstract concepts of the world as thing of mind that structures this stan sand

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Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 2/20/2019 6:24:00 AM

We are aware, and aware of being aware - perhaps the essence of what we are. Topology of though may give rise to more thought, but don’t forget the thinker. Interesting questions, Sand Blown. Incidentally regarding your Soup name, my sonnet:’The Dust or the Wind’ may have some relevance.

Gail Debole

Date: 1/12/2019 11:27:00 AM

In a way, your thoughts relate to my poem that you commented on. Something to ponder, indeed. So much we don't understand, and perhaps, never will. Thanks for sharing your deep thoughts with the world.

Sand Blown
Date: 2/20/2019 7:15:00 AM

thanks gail...drop by any time : )

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/11/2019 3:00:00 AM

"that reality which describes a reality" - I am taking this line apart in my mind, rolling it over and over, liking it a lot, wondering if I will borrow this idea and make a new poem with it when my subconscious has forgotten it was YOUR idea. I do not want to steal anything, but it is intriguing to me.

Sand Blown
Date: 1/11/2019 10:43:00 AM

just words...man...be cool as you can...face piles of trials with smiles...for it beguiles them to believe you perceive the web they weave...so, keep on writing free (moody blues lyrics)