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Though the Ship Had Sailed

though that ship had sailed ~ was my ship I'm standing on the dock, still watching with a mixture of sad feelings which exist inside my lonely heart thoughts meanders throughout my head one of those thoughts I have come to know now, I have the what it's ~ what if I had met her twenty years ago our lives might have been different I would love her as she would love me living our lives to the fullest respecting each other everyday though that ship had sailed, we have not this friendship goes far beyond friendship a love does exist between us as friends who will love cause they are friends we simply are the best soulmates forever and always her and I

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Date: 10/28/2016 12:30:00 AM
It's like your inner thoughts spilled a dream onto paper, a treasured dream and a sincere fantasy wrapped in both longing and acceptance. It is emotional and I was touched by the depth of feeling ... CayCay
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Karl Lorson Sr
Date: 10/28/2016 1:15:00 AM
CayCay, thank you for reading this poem. I have a very good friend that has brought me out of my shell, to open my heart once again! Susan has been my staunchest supporter. Thanks again,,,,,,,,Jim
Date: 10/27/2016 4:00:00 PM
Very sweet! :)
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Karl Lorson Sr
Date: 10/27/2016 4:41:00 PM
Heidi, thank you for commenting on this poem! I am very new to this site and would enjoy following you! Being retired, I have plenty of time on my hands to read what you have written. Again thanks Heidi,,,,,,,,Jim

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