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October-16- 2025

Rumi Quotes Poetry Contest

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~ PLACED FIRST~


 

Though Gone, We are Together

"Lovers don't finally meet somewhere. They're in each other all along".
____________ By Rumi


Once there was eternal spring all around
With plants and flowers in multi hues and scents abound
Butterflies from here and there and places unseen,
Flitted back and forth in colorful sheen.

Birds sang tuneful songs of contentment.
Squirrels and bunnies hopped in spirits buoyant.
But now all along, I see trees- leafless and bare,
Nakedly shivering in winter’s chilly air.

Even when the Earth adorns in full glory,
Here I bide alone, so dull and dreary.
Oh! Dear! Why have you hurriedly left me? 
Was it to make me drift aimless in this turbulent sea?

I tried and yearned to cling on to you for ever
But fate cruelly snatched from me my treasure  
We used to walk through meadows gathering blooms
And roam aimless inhaling the air, the wind perfumes.

We watched life’s ceaseless ebb and flow.
We waited eager to grab life’s evanescent glow. 
Now each wayside flower recalls to me your lovelorn face
And every withering petal reminds me of a bygone grace. 

We have seen seasons quickly glide and shift.
In joy and sorrow months and years passed so swift.
But without you, I feel days move at snail’s pace.
No balm can ease my pain, nor time, my gloomy thoughts erase.

At times your sweet words create reverberations in my soul
And your ubiquitous presence makes me whole.
Deep in silent nights, the odor of your flowing hair,
Comes wafting, and for a while, I feel you quite near.

However far you are, I know within me you ever stay.
The sweet memories of our days together can never decay.
Though in worlds apart we stay and to a celestial realm you belong,
In thoughts and spirit, we are in each other all along.
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Guptar Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 12:49 AM
Heartiest congratulations, dear Valsa, on your first place win in this contest with a lovely poem that makes one live through the feels and words all through. Your poems show a lot of patience that is quite hard to keep through over a long stretch amidst the vicissitudes of life. Keep it though.
Hamilton Avatar
October 19, 2025 at 6:32 AM
what a beautiful poem crying out your love its very hard to live without them as I know too well its been 20 years since Pat passed so I feel for you Valsa a love so deep seldom comes I personally can not replace Pat mourning with you dear hugs Shadow
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 10:01 AM
Deeply profound, my friend. All my best, Aloha.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 12:28 PM
Your "Though Gone, We are Together" is a wonderful write. I enjoyed reading... "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away..............
Narain Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 10:58 AM
A beautiful ppoem from heart. Rumi's idea beautifuully assimilated.
Sharma Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 11:59 PM
Heartfelt :)
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