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Thot Commodity

Sent to grateful receivers, tied tissue paper package Thinnest high pitched crinkles subdue outside sound Drama sits by desire's side, scrunched ball wreckage Item shines silent where tempting excitement's found Picked up then turned in tunnel light, trim translucent Resplendent sexual asset show, shop front renowned From suicidal prospect, she radiates ready road ahead Track paved in pledges strictly forbidding promiscuity Attempting claimant admits her promises are pretend Selecting occurs in empty moments, potential aligned Perfecting her pitch to victims strewn along spectrum Hypergamy erects ladders, to one's class not confined Feminine walks lace edge assurity, swish skirt pretty Tightly tuned to humour tugging tower church chime Sprawl peals of laughter tartan on grass sits a picnic Intimating intentions when ecstacy resonates from loins Parading a masquerading charm, undeniable ticked time Dishes out affection already demised lest limitless coins 12th February Wealth Reflects Affection

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Date: 2/13/2021 4:48:00 AM
I cannot believe your receiving so few comments on these wonderful writes Sigrid, I know you are not interested in mundane platitudes, but the depth within your writing is starkly portrayed, and brutally honest, maybe too much for some, but I’m blown away again, cheers David
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