Those Who Don'T Join

Join
Or be conformed
The ideas that fuel our thoughts are like a cinema flick
Carefully crafted by those who hold influence
Strategic
Confining

Education is a production line
Miss a step and one’s left behind
First comes primary, then secondary school
Or rather inspection

Then they are hastily shipped out to sea
Where the menacing waves batter them to their knees 
They begin to buckle, blend and amend
Whereas they now need to stand out and be different 

After years of being used to conform
They feel like they are being reborn 
Those who don’t join end satisfied
Always kept true to who they are
Knowing exactly where to set their bar
And continuously towards that, they stride
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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June 12, 2016 at 10:56 PM
Bhav,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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June 8, 2016 at 12:25 PM
- Poetry: Music in words .... rhythmic expression of emotion, like the nectar of the bee, you are sharing here with us Bhav :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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June 8, 2016 at 12:25 AM
BHAV, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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June 7, 2016 at 7:10 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Bhav. :)
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June 7, 2016 at 5:00 AM
WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP.... wish you a fascinating journey.. and well written..
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