Those Who Came Before Me

Inspired by previous contest (women in my family)

Women in my family
Were unique in every way
Though miles and years apart
There’s very much to say

Women in my family
Have left a legacy
Filled with pain and strife
But, also, honesty

Women in my family
Weren’t perfectly petite
But have you met a nice girl
Who didn’t like to eat!?

Women in my family
Have gotten in to pickles
They’ve made a mess of things
At times they’ve been quite fickle 

Women in my family
Have paved a way for me
If it weren’t for these ladies
Well..  I would never be

Women in my family
Kissed their young at night
Though trauma weighed them down
They shed relentless light

Women in my family
We’re never very close
They hid their scars
Wished on stars
And now, they all, are ghosts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 3/12/2023 9:34:00 PM
Anna you never cease to amaze me! You have a way of portraying feelings through your writing it just makes me smile! I thoroughly enjoyed this tribute! It is the very definition of writing for yourself in a way that others can find applicable to themselves. Appreciative for the woman they help to make! A.S.
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Date: 9/6/2022 11:23:00 AM
I do genealogy, so I am well aware of women's struggle to survive in a world filled with foolish men! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 9/6/2022 12:09:00 AM
A good poem. Well done
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