Those we love

Those we love don't go away,
They walk beside us every day.
Vines of love on fertile clay,
In air so thin they calmly lay.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Ashley Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 8:14 AM
Dear Samuel, your touching poem offers solace in a beautifully poetic way. A wonderful monorhyme with depth and breadth despite its short form. Congratulations for your success in Rose's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Woods Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 10:02 AM
Short but perfectly said... needs no more! Xo
Muuo  Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 11:20 AM
Thank you.
mysore Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 4:46 AM
lovely write dear poet, so meaningful - 'they calmly lay'. congratulations on your win. Cheers!!!
Muuo  Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 4:56 AM
Thank You.
Sharma Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 4:03 AM
Congratulations
Muuo  Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 11:20 AM
Thank you.
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