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Those we love

Those we love don't go away, They walk beside us every day. Vines of love on fertile clay, In air so thin they calmly lay.

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Date: 7/25/2025 8:14:00 AM
Dear Samuel, your touching poem offers solace in a beautifully poetic way. A wonderful monorhyme with depth and breadth despite its short form. Congratulations for your success in Rose's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/24/2025 10:02:00 AM
Short but perfectly said... needs no more! Xo
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Samuel Muuo
Date: 7/24/2025 11:20:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 7/24/2025 4:46:00 AM
lovely write dear poet, so meaningful - 'they calmly lay'. congratulations on your win. Cheers!!!
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Samuel Muuo
Date: 7/24/2025 4:56:00 AM
Thank You.
Date: 7/24/2025 4:03:00 AM
Congratulations
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Samuel Muuo
Date: 7/24/2025 11:20:00 AM
Thank you.

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