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Those Moments Oceans Away

I live so far oceans away can’t get up and visit when I want just hear about all the joys and sorrows weddings, births and demises successes and failures how I wish to live those moments to lock forever in my sight the day his baby girl was born my brother’s face fill with delight to help soak her tears I wasn’t there for my sister when her husband died kept on calling she couldn’t talk the time was to hug and hold Written on 08/12/2016 Contest :It takes four by Broken Wings

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Date: 8/23/2016 11:05:00 AM
Sara, it is very hard to be so far away with tears in your heart congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/22/2016 1:29:00 PM
Sara, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem ~
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Date: 8/22/2016 12:27:00 PM
Sara, a beautiful poem lady...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 8/14/2016 4:10:00 AM
Boy can I identify with the sadness in this poem Sara. My family lives over 2,500 miles across the ocean. We save for their trips to visit when they can. A very touching poem that really hits home! ; ) 7
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Date: 8/12/2016 9:06:00 PM
Sara, so heartfelt and sad, but so emotionally conveyed by the words in your well-written four forms or poetry. Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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