Trudy Diane Rider Poet Free verse

Those Lips

Those lips,
     enticing, soft and warm
Hidden, in part, by your mustache
tickling my neck and ear
as you softly kiss and tease

Those lips,
     pleasing, smiling
how often I've touched,
tasted and kissed
those wonderful lips

Those lips,
     now weary, tight with pain
tinged in blue as you fight to breathe, 
to kiss me one last time, and
whisper "I love you" through
                                          those lips.

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James Peranteau October 7, 2023 at 10:11 AM my dear poet, such the touching write...i'm that pneuma, staring up at you, praying; you remember, to wipe mine nose, mine knees up when i sit 'pon mine throne...i'm now one uv those hes, who hopes his shes, know, we luv thee....much love, me

Old Buck June 15, 2016 at 1:46 PM TDR: For me that was a wonderful "roller coaster ride" of words and emotions. Thanks for sharing with all of us in the soup. oldbuck Trudy Diane Rider June 15, 2016 at 1:55 PM Thank you, again, for the humbling compliment on my work. ~Trudy~

Skat A June 10, 2016 at 10:54 PM Amazing write and imagery Trudy. The ending thought was touching... SKAT Trudy Diane Rider June 15, 2016 at 1:53 PM Thank you Sweet lady. Still makes me teary eyed myself! ~Trudy~

Susan Palli October 23, 2013 at 12:22 PM Excellent write!

Ken Carroll August 28, 2013 at 5:59 PM Hi Trudy, A nice sensual write..Thanks for sharing.. Ken

Debbie Guzzi November 21, 2012 at 2:35 PM Such a touching write..you haven't been here in a while I'm hoping you are well and cherish this memory. Happy Thanks Giving Light & Love Trudy Diane Rider November 21, 2012 at 9:26 PM Hoping to get back here soon, with Dave sick and a new puppy, seems I have no time for me and my poetry anymore. Thank you for stopping by and commenting. I miss PS so much!

Apoorva Patrikar September 8, 2012 at 11:56 PM sensual and beautiful

Innocent Raphael September 7, 2012 at 6:49 PM wow, this is great

Joy Wellington July 23, 2012 at 6:05 PM A very sensual write...good luck in the contest. Sounds like a winner. One love. Joy Wells Trudy Diane Rider July 23, 2012 at 6:07 PM Thank you very much Joy!

Jane Kostman July 23, 2012 at 5:30 PM What a sweet poem...reminds me of my huband and me..but he don't have a mustashe any more since he is militay. once in a while he gets fuzzy...but not to bad lol. Great write Jane XoXo Trudy Diane Rider July 23, 2012 at 5:35 PM Thank you for the lovely comments Jane, my husband also, no longer sports the mustache due to medical reasons now, but I remember and I have pictures...sometimes I can even still feel it...LOL