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Those Lips

Those lips,
     enticing, soft and warm
Hidden, in part, by your mustache
tickling my neck and ear
as you softly kiss and tease

Those lips,
     pleasing, smiling
how often I've touched,
tasted and kissed
those wonderful lips

Those lips,
     now weary, tight with pain
tinged in blue as you fight to breathe, 
to kiss me one last time, and
whisper "I love you" through
                                          those lips.

Copyright © Trudy Diane Rider | Year Posted 2012

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James Peranteau Date: 10/7/2023 10:11:00 AM my dear poet, such the touching write...i'm that pneuma, staring up at you, praying; you remember, to wipe mine nose, mine knees up when i sit 'pon mine throne...i'm now one uv those hes, who hopes his shes, know, we luv thee....much love, me Login to Reply

Old Buck Date: 6/15/2016 1:46:00 PM TDR: For me that was a wonderful "roller coaster ride" of words and emotions. Thanks for sharing with all of us in the soup. oldbuck Login to Reply Trudy Diane Rider Date: 6/15/2016 1:55:00 PM Thank you, again, for the humbling compliment on my work. ~Trudy~

Skat A Date: 6/10/2016 10:54:00 PM Amazing write and imagery Trudy. The ending thought was touching... SKAT Login to Reply Trudy Diane Rider Date: 6/15/2016 1:53:00 PM Thank you Sweet lady. Still makes me teary eyed myself! ~Trudy~

Susan Palli Date: 10/23/2013 12:22:00 PM Excellent write! Login to Reply

Ken Carroll Date: 8/28/2013 5:59:00 PM Hi Trudy, A nice sensual write..Thanks for sharing.. Ken Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/21/2012 2:35:00 PM Such a touching write..you haven't been here in a while I'm hoping you are well and cherish this memory. Happy Thanks Giving Light & Love Login to Reply Trudy Diane Rider Date: 11/21/2012 9:26:00 PM Hoping to get back here soon, with Dave sick and a new puppy, seems I have no time for me and my poetry anymore. Thank you for stopping by and commenting. I miss PS so much!

Apoorva Patrikar Date: 9/8/2012 11:56:00 PM sensual and beautiful Login to Reply

Innocent Raphael Date: 9/7/2012 6:49:00 PM wow, this is great Login to Reply

Joy Wellington Date: 7/23/2012 6:05:00 PM A very sensual write...good luck in the contest. Sounds like a winner. One love. Joy Wells Login to Reply Trudy Diane Rider Date: 7/23/2012 6:07:00 PM Thank you very much Joy!

Jane Kostman Date: 7/23/2012 5:30:00 PM What a sweet poem...reminds me of my huband and me..but he don't have a mustashe any more since he is militay. once in a while he gets fuzzy...but not to bad lol. Great write Jane XoXo Login to Reply Trudy Diane Rider Date: 7/23/2012 5:35:00 PM Thank you for the lovely comments Jane, my husband also, no longer sports the mustache due to medical reasons now, but I remember and I have pictures...sometimes I can even still feel it...LOL