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Those High, Noble Walls

Staring eyes -- wider than their wild-eyed Horses! Flared nostrils snorting as a stallion's To the gusting wind; And against that wind: long, sweptback hair, As black as ravens wings, Streaming out against the cloudless sky. Through these inflamed veins of man and horse -- An enraged blood that frantically courses! A terrifying, primordial force That plunges in to kill or die. Staring eyes -- wider than the most intense Amethyst! Flared nostrils betray a sneer prompted by Well practised contempt; In the flickering mirror the corners of her mouth Uplifted: an all too apparent cruel abandonment. Unbundled her auburn hair, lets it fall; At that hushed moment all the Gods compelled To shudder at such an awful beauty as is this. And tragic Cassandra who alone would dwell To agonize upon what then fell over those high, noble walls.

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Date: 4/30/2021 4:34:00 PM
I read your conversation below with Silent One to know what the poem was about, but as I read it, It DID make me think of an ancient myth. You write so impressively. thanks for seeing several of my poems. Wish I could return the favor but I am WAY behind here and hubbie will be home soon for dinner. What a busy week!!
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John Fleming
Date: 5/1/2021 11:08:00 AM
Many thanks for taking the time to read through and comment, Andrea...you have always been so very encouraging regarding my poetic attempts. Much appreciated! My very best regards as ever -- cheers! :) john
Date: 10/29/2020 12:41:00 PM
Do you mean Cassandra as the prophet of doom? Hope all is well John.
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Date: 11/14/2020 5:42:00 PM
The poem is about Helen of Troy; especially poignant -- her dreadful beauty! And yes -- quite right, Cassandra was cursed with the power of prophecy; I believe she spurned Apollo's advances. He then endowed her with prophetic powers...but with a twist -- she was cursed to be forever disbelieved! With all too apparent tragic consequences. Cheers, Silent One!

Book: Shattered Sighs