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Those Exotic Enchanting Eyes and Long Dark Curls

Those Exotic Enchanting Eyes And Long Dark Curls Found you there, heart resting on beautiful cloud with a pretty so great, you had to be proud. Those exotic enchanting eyes and long dark curls all of you so sweet, my mind fell into swirls. Deepest trepidation when I dared to ask you out your, "of course", made heart and soul shout. Joy rained down back in those blessed miracle days with my saying, "I love you", a thousand ways! You filled my sails, sending my world into motion flying to you, I crossed the Pacific ocean. Tender and sweet, moment of our first embrace dear love found, my mind holds every trace. Once my days were sad and filled with dark curses now they shine while writing you verses! Future promises, in only death, shall we ever part that promise sings so poetic in my heart! Found you there, heart resting on beautiful cloud with a pretty so great, you had to be proud. Those exotic enchanting eyes and long dark curls all of you so sweet, my mind fell into swirls. Robert J. Lindley, 12-19-2004 Note- A poem I wrote to my darling wife after only nine days as husband and wife. A private poem that she has so graciously allowed me to post. In my humble opinion, my best ever love poem. Which is why I wanted it posted here.

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Date: 10/25/2015 3:36:00 PM
Congrats on the win... SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2015 5:49:00 PM
Robert .. thank you for sharing your love story to us and for supporting my contest! I was so inspired .. CONGRATULATIONS!!!! :O))
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Date: 10/22/2015 1:39:00 PM
Robert, Congratulations on "A child's first home WIN." **SKAT**
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Date: 10/21/2015 5:02:00 PM
Robert,I just stopped by to say congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Date: 10/3/2015 12:16:00 PM
- An "open heart" poem, Robert - A true love poems, beautifully !!! - (Tr.) - I wish you a great weekend - Liam and me has posted a beautiful poem today, you're welcome :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2015 11:16:00 PM
So beautiful and sincere is this, Robert. My kabayan is fortunate to be the muse for such flowing verses. The title captured my attention, which I have correctly assumed to be for her. 7 and fav! hugs to both of you!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/2/2015 11:35:00 PM
You too are blessed my friend. My darling wife only agree to allow this poem to be presented because she says its not toooooooooo intimate as our some that I write her. lol On those very sensual/intimate poems her answer is always a very firm no!
Date: 10/2/2015 5:36:00 PM
What a touching write friend. Without a notice I smile as I read this. A very great write indeed............A.M.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/2/2015 8:05:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Very happy that you liked it and that it worth commenting on.
Date: 10/2/2015 2:47:00 PM
It is beautiful, Robert. Very beautiful. True love brings out the beauty of poetry. I'm sure your wife was touched with this beautiful piece. hugs
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/2/2015 7:57:00 PM
Thanks my dear friend. Always a pleasure to receive comments from you!

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