THOSE DAYS ARE GONE

remember when we 

          slept >< 

                      on the 

                                beach ^^^^^

     listening to the  
 
w         v            s           a            e            w           v           s             
      a           e           w           v            s             a           e  
               
                                     rock us to 

z
  z
    z
      z
         sleep?
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Kendrick Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 4:12 PM
Congratulations on your creative winning work. Way to go. Sara K
Steele Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 8:10 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words, Sara. Much appreciated.
Empress Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 10:37 PM
So good to see you on soup too dear kahlani! Thats a very creative poem! This calms my soul as i read! Soul warming! Pleasure reading you! Congrats on your placement! Sending you light always
Steele Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 11:12 PM
Thank you very much, Empress. Your lovely words are always appreciated.
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