Thors Night and Day

Lightnings flash
before your eyes
The sudden shock
White light in the sky
Thor's hammer falls
Trurning night to day
But then it all settles
The light and the night
the air still shimmers
From the event that took place
You've seen the life and death
Thors night and day
But in the blink of an eye
It all went away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smalling Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 9:10 AM
You have a wonderflow of imagery that brings the Nordic mythic out ... i love it.
Shahwan Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 1:58 PM
Beautiful poem.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 4:16 PM
Reese, Adding a little mythology is a nice touch to your poem. Keep Writing. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Lovingly, Dane
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