Thors Night and Day

Lightnings flash
before your eyes
The sudden shock
White light in the sky
Thor's hammer falls
Trurning night to day
But then it all settles
The light and the night
the air still shimmers
From the event that took place
You've seen the life and death
Thors night and day
But in the blink of an eye
It all went away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/7/2009 9:10:00 AM
You have a wonderflow of imagery that brings the Nordic mythic out ... i love it.
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Date: 5/1/2009 1:58:00 PM
Beautiful poem.
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Date: 4/28/2009 4:16:00 PM
Reese, Adding a little mythology is a nice touch to your poem. Keep Writing. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Lovingly, Dane
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