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Thorns

Thorns When to red roses thorns virtually applaud and nature shows its art.... When in green garden thorns are beginning to reign then the autumn will start ... When in the passion sharp thorns of prickly longing stab deeply pierce a heart ... Written April 4th, 2016 For contest "Mystic haikus" by Mystic rose Awarded N/A Entered for Screwed XIII contest by rob carmack

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Date: 4/21/2016 5:53:00 AM
Within great beauty, excruciating pain can also be found. Such strength in your words, great write!
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Date: 4/5/2016 2:32:00 AM
Upma, I think these are perfect for the contest and I am loving them 7 ~
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Date: 4/5/2016 1:39:00 AM
It is a wonderful write. Wish u best of luck for the contest........Mk
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Date: 4/4/2016 3:59:00 PM
Beautiful Umpa, Your words unfold so nicely, and compact, a deflowered stem with thorn left intact. J.
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Date: 4/4/2016 3:49:00 PM
Thorns hidden amongst beauty, waiting to inflict pain on the unwary. Lovely, Upma! gl in the contest. // paul
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Date: 4/4/2016 2:54:00 PM
- Beautiful written, Dr. Upma - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/4/2016 2:01:00 PM
Pretty sad ain't it Doc. Starts out nice but that last one is sad but honest. Really nice Upma. Good luck and Peace my friend:)
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Date: 4/4/2016 12:21:00 PM
Wonderful Dr. Sharma, best wishes in the contest...
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