Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Haiku

Thorns

Thorns




When to red roses
thorns virtually applaud
and 
nature shows its art....

When in green garden
thorns are beginning to reign
then
the autumn will start ...

When in the passion
sharp thorns of prickly longing 
stab
deeply pierce a heart ...





Written April 4th, 2016
For contest "Mystic haikus" by Mystic rose
Awarded N/A

Entered for Screwed XIII contest by rob carmack

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Dineen Williams Gault April 21, 2016 at 5:53 AM Within great beauty, excruciating pain can also be found. Such strength in your words, great write!

Constance La France April 5, 2016 at 2:32 AM Upma, I think these are perfect for the contest and I am loving them 7 ~

Manmath Dalei April 5, 2016 at 1:39 AM It is a wonderful write. Wish u best of luck for the contest........Mk

J. Tudor April 4, 2016 at 3:59 PM Beautiful Umpa, Your words unfold so nicely, and compact, a deflowered stem with thorn left intact. J.

Paul Callus April 4, 2016 at 3:49 PM Thorns hidden amongst beauty, waiting to inflict pain on the unwary. Lovely, Upma! gl in the contest. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen April 4, 2016 at 2:54 PM - Beautiful written, Dr. Upma - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner April 4, 2016 at 2:01 PM Pretty sad ain't it Doc. Starts out nice but that last one is sad but honest. Really nice Upma. Good luck and Peace my friend:)

Charlie Smith April 4, 2016 at 12:21 PM Wonderful Dr. Sharma, best wishes in the contest...