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Thorn and Petal


The thorn asked the scarlet petal,

"Why is it gardeners admire your beauty
and are intoxicated by your fragrance,
yet they fear a prick from me?"

The petal replied,

"because you are a harsh reminder
that behind everything beautiful
there is pain."
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Comsmos Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 5:31 AM
That is so thoughtful.
Hind Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 4:56 PM
Very meaningful short poem...
Manley Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 9:47 PM
I could see this as a many page dialog the beauty and the pain. Life's entwined and ingrained. Can't have one without the other.
Brotherton Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 5:36 PM
Some wise words my friend. Another fav to add to my list.
Leiser Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 2:25 PM
Your succinct words are filled with deep meaning, Silent. This is lovely! :)
Delaney Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 1:47 PM
This is so profound, SO: I posted on a similar theme very early when I first came to the Soup. I hope you don’t mind if I share a link to it so you can see what I mean. This is a definite FAV for me, too. SuZ. https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/cobwebs_on_the_rose_490153
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 7:36 AM
Ahh, has Shakespeare turned I'd dare say. A very nice succinct perception, Silent One. Aloha, William
Pandit Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 6:49 AM
Simply awesome, my friend. A definite FAVE!
Maverick Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 5:28 AM
I'll take it Si.'
Empress Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 3:18 AM
This is so profound, and meaningful, and so true, sometimes we admire and love the fragrance of beautiful flowers and roses but fear the thorns, or are reluctant to touch them. Just like in our lives, people love the beauty but not the darkness, they fear that. And also behind everything beautiful theres pain, not everyones willing to take the pain. Deep and philosophical. I loved this! So well delivered and phrased!
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