Thoda Saa Dard

Kuchh aasamaa si bikhari jamiii
     Bahata huaa paani, par thahari nadi...
Aa baant le ham jannat jindagi
         Thoda saa dard thodi si namii

Sarahad to bas benaam bandigi
     Dil se dhadakan tak ye simati chali
Ham to haantho me haanth le chale
        Baant le resham si saari khushiii...
     Thoda saa dard , thodi si namiii
                Aa baant le ham jannat jindagiii....


By  AMIT SHUKLA....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 28, 2024 at 5:26 AM
I wish I could understand this... Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 22, 2016 at 2:26 PM
Amit, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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December 31, 2015 at 11:12 PM
Amit, enjoyed reading your tonight. Hope to see you active this coming year. Goodbye, 2015 --- Hello 2016. God Bless. SKAT
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