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Thoda Saa Dard

Kuchh aasamaa si bikhari jamiii Bahata huaa paani, par thahari nadi... Aa baant le ham jannat jindagi Thoda saa dard thodi si namii Sarahad to bas benaam bandigi Dil se dhadakan tak ye simati chali Ham to haantho me haanth le chale Baant le resham si saari khushiii... Thoda saa dard , thodi si namiii Aa baant le ham jannat jindagiii.... By AMIT SHUKLA....

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Date: 9/28/2024 5:26:00 AM
I wish I could understand this... Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/22/2016 2:26:00 PM
Amit, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/31/2015 11:12:00 PM
Amit, enjoyed reading your tonight. Hope to see you active this coming year. Goodbye, 2015 --- Hello 2016. God Bless. SKAT
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