Thistle and Vine

From the thistle and vine
From the thicket of thorn
Into the light of the morning    
Out from the briar patch, gone

In a flicker of light
Into the glimmer of dawn
Slipping out at the daybreak
With the rise of the sun

In the ticking of time
From the clock on the wall
Ring the bells of a new day 
Sing the words of this song
 
As the cripple creek winds
Along the bend in the road
Through the cut of the canyon
Through the layers of stone

In the literal mind
Of the words as they're known
Comes the turn of a new phrase
Twisted off an old one 

Down from the rain in the sky
Onto the earth where it falls
Through the Rock of the Ages 
Through the Roll of the Souls

In the blink of an eye
In the wink of one more
Slipping back in the nightfall
By the light of the stars

Bring the whistle and rhyme
Into the twisted knot hole
Another day in a lifetime
Back to the briar patch, gone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 9:04 PM
I like the rhythm of this one. Such interesting imagery too
Schatz Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 11:08 PM
Thank you Andrea.
Rose  Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 6:42 PM
Very nice rhymes here, much enjoyed the verse :)
Schatz Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 12:52 AM
Thank you Mystic Rose. Thank you for reading it.
Baker Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 9:34 PM
Creative cycle of life poem, Robert. Well done, my friend. I like your imagery and the rhythm in your poem. Bill
Schatz Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 5:45 PM
Thank you Bill!
Rodgers Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 5:16 AM
Dear Robert, This is a mesmerizing journey through nature's cycles and the passage of time. Your poetic prowess shines as you create imagery of thistles, vines, and the changing landscape of dawn and dusk. This is an evocative reflection on life's rhythms and the eternal dance of existence. A great poem! - Blessings, Daniel
Schatz Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 5:45 PM
Thank you so much for your comments Daniel!
Ashley Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 5:51 PM
Dear Robert, your creative, captivating imagery depicts time in a beautiful way to enthrall my imagination. I adore the symbolism, as I interpret it, of the "thistle and vine". The vine representing unity and continuity (time), and the thistle representing the strength and courage one needs to face each new day.. and the "briar patch", where the night protects the purity of the next new "glimmer of dawn." Splendid poetry! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Schatz Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 5:46 PM
Thank you Susan! It's interesting to hear how you interpret the symbolism. Makes me think about the poem in a different way...
Greenhough Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 12:14 AM
This is an amazing poem. I sense yesterday, today, and tomorrow since it seems to encompass all of time. Good luck with the contest.
Schatz Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 2:43 AM
Thank you Hilda. I love how you get the all time vibe! Cheers...
Schatz Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 3:54 PM
Entry for This and That Vol. 23 1 poem on "narrow margin" 2/19
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