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Thistle and Vine

From the thistle and vine From the thicket of thorn Into the light of the morning Out from the briar patch, gone In a flicker of light Into the glimmer of dawn Slipping out at the daybreak With the rise of the sun In the ticking of time From the clock on the wall Ring the bells of a new day Sing the words of this song As the cripple creek winds Along the bend in the road Through the cut of the canyon Through the layers of stone In the literal mind Of the words as they're known Comes the turn of a new phrase Twisted off an old one Down from the rain in the sky Onto the earth where it falls Through the Rock of the Ages Through the Roll of the Souls In the blink of an eye In the wink of one more Slipping back in the nightfall By the light of the stars Bring the whistle and rhyme Into the twisted knot hole Another day in a lifetime Back to the briar patch, gone

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Date: 2/24/2024 9:04:00 PM
I like the rhythm of this one. Such interesting imagery too
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Robert Schatz
Date: 2/24/2024 11:08:00 PM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 2/22/2024 6:42:00 PM
Very nice rhymes here, much enjoyed the verse :)
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Robert Schatz
Date: 2/23/2024 12:52:00 AM
Thank you Mystic Rose. Thank you for reading it.
Date: 2/21/2024 9:34:00 PM
Creative cycle of life poem, Robert. Well done, my friend. I like your imagery and the rhythm in your poem. Bill
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Robert Schatz
Date: 2/22/2024 5:45:00 PM
Thank you Bill!
Date: 2/21/2024 5:16:00 AM
Dear Robert, This is a mesmerizing journey through nature's cycles and the passage of time. Your poetic prowess shines as you create imagery of thistles, vines, and the changing landscape of dawn and dusk. This is an evocative reflection on life's rhythms and the eternal dance of existence. A great poem! - Blessings, Daniel
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Robert Schatz
Date: 2/22/2024 5:45:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comments Daniel!
Date: 2/20/2024 5:51:00 PM
Dear Robert, your creative, captivating imagery depicts time in a beautiful way to enthrall my imagination. I adore the symbolism, as I interpret it, of the "thistle and vine". The vine representing unity and continuity (time), and the thistle representing the strength and courage one needs to face each new day.. and the "briar patch", where the night protects the purity of the next new "glimmer of dawn." Splendid poetry! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Robert Schatz
Date: 2/22/2024 5:46:00 PM
Thank you Susan! It's interesting to hear how you interpret the symbolism. Makes me think about the poem in a different way...
Date: 2/20/2024 12:14:00 AM
This is an amazing poem. I sense yesterday, today, and tomorrow since it seems to encompass all of time. Good luck with the contest.
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Robert Schatz
Date: 2/20/2024 2:43:00 AM
Thank you Hilda. I love how you get the all time vibe! Cheers...
Date: 2/19/2024 3:54:00 PM
Entry for This and That Vol. 23 1 poem on "narrow margin" 2/19
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