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This Watcher of Mine

She’s stubborn, this watcher of mine and she fights hard to win the battles she wages in my mind. Her victory comes when I shrink away from the words that fight to break free. Yet, she looks at me with scorn when I give up and walk away, but isn’t that what she wanted? She delights it seems in planting seeds of doubt that seem to grow wild and rampant. Convincing me my words are nothing except foolish, childish dreams. “Who would care”? She asks with contempt. “What if you’re right”? I scream at her. As she turns to walk away she looks over her shoulder and softly replies, “What if I’m wrong”?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 9/3/2021 4:20:00 AM
Really nice how everything blends
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Date: 11/27/2018 1:45:00 AM
I understand the lines with discerning guilt. Beautifully written poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/27/2016 7:49:00 PM
JULIE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/9/2015 8:57:00 AM
Julie, enjoyed reading your verse today. SKAT
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Date: 2/11/2013 11:16:00 PM
awesome write, thank you for sharing
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