This Watcher of Mine

She’s stubborn, this watcher of mine and
she fights hard to win the battles 
she wages in my mind.
Her victory comes when I shrink 
away from the words
that fight to break free.
Yet, she looks at me with scorn
when I give up and walk away, 
but isn’t that what she wanted?
She delights it seems
in planting seeds of doubt that seem to
grow wild and rampant.
Convincing me my words are nothing
except foolish, childish dreams.
“Who would care”?
She asks with contempt.
“What if you’re right”?
I scream at her.
As she turns to walk away
she looks over her shoulder 
and softly replies,
“What if I’m wrong”?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Agustin Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 7:25 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Ikima Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 4:20 AM
Really nice how everything blends
Kshetrimayum Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 1:45 AM
I understand the lines with discerning guilt. Beautifully written poem. Thanks for sharing.
A   Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 7:49 PM
JULIE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 8:57 AM
Julie, enjoyed reading your verse today. SKAT
Cox Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 11:16 PM
awesome write, thank you for sharing
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