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High snowbanks surround Slush puddles frozen on street Seagull atop pole. An Haiku from Your Window contest Carol Fillmore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 10/6/2019 6:19:00 AM
The seagull is already determined to take off. A moment of silence before that. From this poem I feel the severe cold of winter and feel the vitality of creatures. I love this poem very much.
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Date: 2/8/2011 4:51:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..I wonder how Seagulls make it since they are water birds and everything is frozen?..Good luck in the contest..Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sonnets are one of the easiest one's to write..Sara
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Date: 2/7/2011 9:51:00 PM
Beautiful view described with perfection. Harry
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Date: 2/7/2011 10:44:00 AM
Great description of images, symbolism and well inspired ink, keep it highly up. love, lightning ink.
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Date: 2/7/2011 10:43:00 AM
How ironic it must be to see a seagull (to me a symbol of warm weather and summer) on a pole over the snow banks. You did a wonderful job describing the view from your window, Carol. Michael's contest is allowing us to get to know other poets better by seeing their surroundings through their eyes. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/7/2011 9:38:00 AM
Nice view you have pictured well in words of the season, Carol
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Date: 2/7/2011 9:26:00 AM
LOVE this. =] I give it a seven. Take care of yourself. I'm looking forward to reading more. Dana'lynn
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Date: 2/7/2011 7:53:00 AM
dazzling, carol!! surely, a winning delight.. wait for mine, coming soon!! :) hugggs nette
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Date: 2/7/2011 7:46:00 AM
Looks like a good entry for the contest.
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