Delilah Ventura Poet Free verse

This Touching Feeling, Is You

Our relationship felt like a ...abomination
Heart so scorn and broken

					But
				
		This affection, touching spirit running threw my spine
		          Passion touching my skin and making me spin
			   Yearning for my blood 

Yes, I praise


	For struggle to fight for our love
	       It's worth the fight
	I attempt to cherish our relationship

						Tease me please

			Flame reach my finger tips
			      For love, I taste you all the way
			Tender feeling, stay in my cup

									Over flow, no
							
				For love has reached my inner soul
					As, I cry no more
				Flowers bloom my tears
					Bamboozle no longer lives here
I scream

		Only you
				Only my boo
							Only my true love

					Which is you

                                                                                                   TeddyBoo

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Good Night December 21, 2012 at 8:43 PM i like the passion in this one nice job :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen November 10, 2012 at 7:38 AM A poem with soft and good feelings, love it - It is written by a really good poet. (You Delilah !) - thank you! - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi November 9, 2012 at 12:01 PM Hi There I used all your words but I had to connect them with some of my own to make a poem? Is that OK? Above you didn't use ONLY the words on your list but you did use ALL of them..please let me know. I can do a new write if needs be. Light & Love

Vicky Tsiluma November 8, 2012 at 12:05 AM I LOVE it! The theme, the beat, the arrangment - all well done. Fighting for love can be an uphill struggle but the fruits are oh so joyous. Nice! (And thank you).

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 7, 2012 at 11:08 PM LOVELY ELEGANT WORDS OF ROMANTIC EXPRESSION DELILAH .. LUV THE PRESENTATION OF FLOWING SENTIMENTS LUV .. THANKXX SO MUCH FOR MY BIG WIN IN ADULTERY ..NOTHING SPEAKS LIKE EXPERIENCE ..AND U GAVE POETS A GREAT CHALLENGE .. AM HONORED LUV.