Ironic Zink Poet Pantoum

This Title Be

Enters entitled, exits entitled; "Oh where art thou," this title be?
Entirely composed of humans in this entire amenity.
Humanities amenities entirely entitled to a life less entirety.
Entitled to less entirety than one could humanly admire, admirably.

Entirely composed of humans in this entire amenity.
The amenities comprising humanities commodity
Entitled to less entirety than one could humanly admire, admirably.
Are contradictory to the overall popular opinion of society...

The amenities comprising humanities commodity
Adversely affecting humanity, more so than less
Are contradictory to the overall popular opinion of society...
Anonymity is anonymous to say the entireness.

Adversely affecting humanity, more so than less
Humanities amenities entirely entitled to a life less entirety.
Anonymity is anonymous to say the entireness.
Enters entitled, exits entitled; "Oh where art thou," this title be?


6/4/2017
Contest: Rhyme Battle 7
Sponsor: Juli- Michelle

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Jan Allison June 27, 2017 at 8:56 PM dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Ironic Zink June 28, 2017 at 2:36 PM Hugs Chris xx

Kim Rodrigues June 27, 2017 at 8:40 PM Congrats, IZ Ironic Zink June 28, 2017 at 2:34 PM Thanks Kim!

Juli- Michelle June 27, 2017 at 1:36 PM Congratulations on your 5th place win in my rhyme battle contest! Love, Juli-Michelle Ironic Zink June 28, 2017 at 2:34 PM Thank you! I'm pleased with my placement!

Jan Allison June 4, 2017 at 5:57 AM oh gosh what a tongue twister in its entirety lol :-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Ironic Zink June 4, 2017 at 8:00 AM Thank you very much. I utilized an old poem and transformed it into this Pantoum. Glad you commented. :)

Darren White June 4, 2017 at 5:46 AM What you said about my Cicada poem, I can say of your Pantoum: it reads Down to Up as easily as Up to Down (now that is with pantoums perhaps easier than with other poems, but still.....) I love this entry, but please don't make me read it out loud :) Ironic Zink June 4, 2017 at 8:01 AM Why thank you DW; I'm grateful for your comment!