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This Title Be

Enters entitled, exits entitled; "Oh where art thou," this title be? Entirely composed of humans in this entire amenity. Humanities amenities entirely entitled to a life less entirety. Entitled to less entirety than one could humanly admire, admirably. Entirely composed of humans in this entire amenity. The amenities comprising humanities commodity Entitled to less entirety than one could humanly admire, admirably. Are contradictory to the overall popular opinion of society... The amenities comprising humanities commodity Adversely affecting humanity, more so than less Are contradictory to the overall popular opinion of society... Anonymity is anonymous to say the entireness. Adversely affecting humanity, more so than less Humanities amenities entirely entitled to a life less entirety. Anonymity is anonymous to say the entireness. Enters entitled, exits entitled; "Oh where art thou," this title be? 6/4/2017 Contest: Rhyme Battle 7 Sponsor: Juli- Michelle

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/27/2017 8:56:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Ironic Zink
Date: 6/28/2017 2:36:00 PM

Hugs Chris xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/27/2017 8:40:00 PM

Congrats, IZ

Ironic Zink
Date: 6/28/2017 2:34:00 PM

Thanks Kim!

Juli- Michelle

Date: 6/27/2017 1:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your 5th place win in my rhyme battle contest! Love, Juli-Michelle

Ironic Zink
Date: 6/28/2017 2:34:00 PM

Thank you! I'm pleased with my placement!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/4/2017 5:57:00 AM

oh gosh what a tongue twister in its entirety lol :-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Ironic Zink
Date: 6/4/2017 8:00:00 AM

Thank you very much. I utilized an old poem and transformed it into this Pantoum. Glad you commented. :)

Darren White

Date: 6/4/2017 5:46:00 AM

What you said about my Cicada poem, I can say of your Pantoum: it reads Down to Up as easily as Up to Down (now that is with pantoums perhaps easier than with other poems, but still.....) I love this entry, but please don't make me read it out loud :)

Ironic Zink
Date: 6/4/2017 8:01:00 AM

Why thank you DW; I'm grateful for your comment!