This Space --What Name
T HIS s pace --> what name;
a feeling that has no shame,
hugging this syntax in
lead and paper, when did i
never wholly kiss you?
Last night my heart
[while the world spun
in the pine --
in the pine while you]
shivered my lonely fool
And I, me and body too
never found since you
left and took foot
above the pine
leaving shatterDreams!
this space -- what name;
a feeling with no shame
and my heart goes thereToo
above the pine where you go
while leaving bleeding ellipsis ...
:: 10-15-2014 ::
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