Darren White Poet Pantoum

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This Song, It Is For You

This song, it is for you
Because my heart is singing
All that I feel is true
The happiness you’re bringing

Because my heart is singing
The sun is burning bright
The happiness you’re bringing
Chases away the night

The sun is burning bright
And though the nightmare lingers
Chases away the night
With friendly fiery fingers

And though the nightmare lingers
I shiver in your arms
With friendly fiery fingers
You keep me safe and warm

I shiver in your arms
You whisper in my ear
You keep me safe and warm
I want you always near

You whisper in my ear
The words that live within me
I want you always near
Two hearts, eternally

The words that live within me
All that I feel is true
Two hearts, eternally
This song, it is for you

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1st place in contest Pantoum Poem,
Judged October 16, 2016

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Jason Williams December 17, 2016 at 6:57 PM You already know this is one of my top 5 from you Darren. Love, Love, Love it! Darren White December 17, 2016 at 11:51 PM Yes, and it flows so natural, I am so happy you love it <3

Claudia Polydoro November 27, 2016 at 6:01 PM This poem is wonderful Darren - congrats on your win :* Darren White November 27, 2016 at 11:09 PM Thanks Claudia <3, I love this poem very much. A Pantoum has such a wonderful cadence and when it flows, it flows, yeah.

Eve Roper October 17, 2016 at 8:16 PM Darren, congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Eve Darren White October 17, 2016 at 10:23 PM Thank you so much Eve, I am soooo happy with it :)

Alexis Y. October 17, 2016 at 10:56 AM Hi Darren, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis Darren White October 17, 2016 at 11:31 AM Thank you. I am SO happy with it \o/ :)

Darren White October 17, 2016 at 12:27 AM Oooohhhh Eve, I sm SO honored!!!! Thank you SO much, I didn't expect this at all :D

Jan Allison October 17, 2016 at 12:10 AM many congrats on your win Darren:-) hugs jan xx Darren White October 17, 2016 at 12:28 AM Wow Jan, I am so happy, you have no idea :D

CayCay Godwin October 11, 2016 at 2:49 PM Oh, Darren - a pantoum to swoon over. Not only are love's rewards poetically lined out, they flow as though a guitar should be gently strumming in accompaniment. If this is for the contest, to me, you have already won with this uniquely love rich write! CayCay Darren White October 11, 2016 at 2:57 PM Ahhh CayCay, thank you SO much, you are making me shy :) Would you believe it that I hadn't even noticed there was still a pantoum contest up??? I have immediately added it there. Thanks for mentioning it!

Probir Gupta October 11, 2016 at 6:23 AM Beautiful ... onomatopoeic ... lovely ... Darren White October 11, 2016 at 6:26 AM Thank you so much for your compliment. It was so good to write this :-)

Jan Allison October 11, 2016 at 2:55 AM What a beautiful romantic pantoum Darren:-) am adding it to my faves I love the impact of the repeated lines I do like this form:-) hugs Jan xx Darren White October 11, 2016 at 3:02 AM Oooohhhh, that's an honour, Jan. Thank you :) xx