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This Song, It Is For You

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This song, it is for you Because my heart is singing All that I feel is true The happiness you’re bringing Because my heart is singing The sun is burning bright The happiness you’re bringing Chases away the night The sun is burning bright And though the nightmare lingers Chases away the night With friendly fiery fingers And though the nightmare lingers I shiver in your arms With friendly fiery fingers You keep me safe and warm I shiver in your arms You whisper in my ear You keep me safe and warm I want you always near You whisper in my ear The words that live within me I want you always near Two hearts, eternally The words that live within me All that I feel is true Two hearts, eternally This song, it is for you *** 1st place in contest Pantoum Poem, Judged October 16, 2016

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Jason Williams

Date: 12/17/2016 6:57:00 PM

You already know this is one of my top 5 from you Darren. Love, Love, Love it!

Darren White
Date: 12/17/2016 11:51:00 PM

Yes, and it flows so natural, I am so happy you love it <3

Claudia Polydoro

Date: 11/27/2016 6:01:00 PM

This poem is wonderful Darren - congrats on your win :*

Darren White
Date: 11/27/2016 11:09:00 PM

Thanks Claudia <3, I love this poem very much. A Pantoum has such a wonderful cadence and when it flows, it flows, yeah.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/17/2016 8:16:00 PM

Darren, congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Eve

Darren White
Date: 10/17/2016 10:23:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve, I am soooo happy with it :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/17/2016 10:56:00 AM

Hi Darren, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Darren White
Date: 10/17/2016 11:31:00 AM

Thank you. I am SO happy with it \o/ :)

Darren White

Date: 10/17/2016 12:27:00 AM

Oooohhhh Eve, I sm SO honored!!!! Thank you SO much, I didn't expect this at all :D

Jan Allison

Date: 10/17/2016 12:10:00 AM

many congrats on your win Darren:-) hugs jan xx

Darren White
Date: 10/17/2016 12:28:00 AM

Wow Jan, I am so happy, you have no idea :D

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/11/2016 2:49:00 PM

Oh, Darren - a pantoum to swoon over. Not only are love's rewards poetically lined out, they flow as though a guitar should be gently strumming in accompaniment. If this is for the contest, to me, you have already won with this uniquely love rich write! CayCay

Darren White
Date: 10/11/2016 2:57:00 PM

Ahhh CayCay, thank you SO much, you are making me shy :) Would you believe it that I hadn't even noticed there was still a pantoum contest up??? I have immediately added it there. Thanks for mentioning it!

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/11/2016 6:23:00 AM

Beautiful ... onomatopoeic ... lovely ...

Darren White
Date: 10/11/2016 6:26:00 AM

Thank you so much for your compliment. It was so good to write this :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/11/2016 2:55:00 AM

What a beautiful romantic pantoum Darren:-) am adding it to my faves I love the impact of the repeated lines I do like this form:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White
Date: 10/11/2016 3:02:00 AM

Oooohhhh, that's an honour, Jan. Thank you :) xx