This Side of Beijing

The young girlie that served me at Burger King Possessed the sweetest smile this side of Beijing I told this sweetie so She started to glow We both felt good as she gave me my onion rings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Eastman Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 9:42 AM
Are you sure she was flattered? After all she gave you onion rings... You know... An upset tummy's delight... Well, in any case... What a way to go! Yum! Yum!
Smith Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 11:06 AM
So the last of the onion rings went to you...I was so disappointed as I was in the drive-thru...settled for some fries...but I wasn't satisfied...so home I went and cooked me up a pot of yummy onion stew
Ellison Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 6:45 AM
Sorry!!!! LOL
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