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Christuraj Alex

This Ship Tableau

Once supremely placed,
This ship, now, lay razed;
It's pushed, pulled, storm-chased,
By weather, debased,
Rust, rot, and moss laced,
Stands, yet, greatness graced...!!!

Tableau - 1

Copyright © Christuraj Alex | Year Posted 2023

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August 29, 2023 at 11:05 AM

Congratulations on your win, Chris! Even in the wreckage you have seen the essence of greatness. What a great lesson for all of us - to see beyond the wreckage of life and into the greatness that is sometimes hidden by wrinkles! Wonderfully done! Blessings of grace to you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 21, 2023 at 3:07 AM

- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Alex ... a sad sight ... left behind ... without value - hugs

August 20, 2023 at 3:58 PM

Great rhyme and detail, Christuraj! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

August 20, 2023 at 12:36 PM

Very nicely done Christuraj, Congrats on your win

August 20, 2023 at 10:59 AM

I enjoyed this one…a bit different then the rest, full of action and description! Congratulations, Chris!

August 18, 2023 at 12:59 PM

your descriptive poem makes these wrecks still have a beauty, good luck in the contest, hugs jan xx

Christuraj Alex

August 18, 2023 at 6:38 PM

Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

August 18, 2023 at 8:47 AM

Hi Chris. There's such sadness in things that have been abandoned. I believe the word 'tableau' needs to be at the end of the poem's title. ;-)

Christuraj Alex

August 18, 2023 at 10:31 AM

Thank you very much. May God Bless You. I have added 'Tableau' in the title.

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