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This Ship Tableau

Once supremely placed, This ship, now, lay razed; It's pushed, pulled, storm-chased, By weather, debased, Rust, rot, and moss laced, Stands, yet, greatness graced...!!! Tableau - 1

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Date: 8/29/2023 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Chris! Even in the wreckage you have seen the essence of greatness. What a great lesson for all of us - to see beyond the wreckage of life and into the greatness that is sometimes hidden by wrinkles! Wonderfully done! Blessings of grace to you!
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Date: 8/21/2023 3:07:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Alex ... a sad sight ... left behind ... without value - hugs
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Date: 8/20/2023 3:58:00 PM
Great rhyme and detail, Christuraj! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/20/2023 12:36:00 PM
Very nicely done Christuraj, Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/20/2023 10:59:00 AM
I enjoyed this one…a bit different then the rest, full of action and description! Congratulations, Chris!
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Date: 8/18/2023 12:59:00 PM
your descriptive poem makes these wrecks still have a beauty, good luck in the contest, hugs jan xx
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/18/2023 6:38:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 8/18/2023 8:47:00 AM
Hi Chris. There's such sadness in things that have been abandoned. I believe the word 'tableau' needs to be at the end of the poem's title. ;-)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/18/2023 10:31:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You. I have added 'Tableau' in the title.

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