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Room

This run-on sentence I can’t erase

Sentenced to a lifetime of repeats,
rewind repeat rewind repeat
I see it written on the walls 
of my mind
the sentence keeps me caged
like a bird dying for light and freedom 
of the open sky of endless blue horizons
but it is only a window of illusion 
upon which I stun myself trying to escape
and still it stays secreted away
written in a language I can see
but can’t understand
even the doctors are helpless
with their potions and powders
and endless talk talk talk
please just read it and translate it 
and tell me what it says
this run-on sentence I can’t erase.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 23, 2026 at 4:22 PM
wow...what a unique poem, totally engaging. Especially liked these lines: but it is only a window of illusion upon which I stun myself trying to escape and still it stays secreted away written in a language I can see but can’t understand
Achara Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 11:34 AM
Thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 10:58 AM
This is a creative write/story with a great picture. A powerful way to start off. Many are caged by a lifetime of repeats, rewind repeat rewind repeat. It is making the mind erase the past. Making room for new happy things.  "Good Luck" If for a contest. Have a wonderful day/week to come writing away............
Achara Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 12:28 PM
Thank you.
Martin Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 8:51 AM
Mockingjay flock with the ravens!
Achara Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 10:41 AM
Oh, Ravens are a whole nother poem!
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