Bukang Liwayway Poet Tanka

This Ring Will Bind Us

This ring will bind us,
To love me with all your heart,
We unite as one,
To be with me forever,
Hope you will accept it dear.

A  symbol of peace,
Unity and purity,
My solemn prayer,
Marry me and live with me,
For the rest of my life, thanks!

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Carol Sunshine Brown October 31, 2012 at 6:47 AM I am so sorry it has taken me this long to get back to you on the comments you have left on my poetry. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment Maria. It truly was appreciated. Love, Carol Bukang Liwayway October 31, 2012 at 7:15 AM It's okay friend Carol :) thanks also for all your comments on my poem. you are one of my favorite poet here on PS. Have a blessed day always. Love, Maria

Len Gasun October 6, 2012 at 10:00 PM This is so sweet and awesome one my dear friend, Mary. Good luck in the contest!!! hugs:) norie Bukang Liwayway October 7, 2012 at 12:22 AM thanks friend Norie..God bless you always..(^_^)