This Precipice

this precipice of existence
that’s the darkness of space
secured and cold	in this deep
and cold		        expanse
we continue		those warning
for God
could not continue on
and fell so far behind
looking for weapons
and not technology
in their shortest
emonure
they fell so far
behind they
were thankfully
to get torn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 6:18 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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