Joanna Daniel Poet Rhyme

This Poem Rose - Mr

There is someone who's placed a rose, 
The rose inside my heart, 
My love for him blossoms and grows, 
For he's so sweet and smart, 

Each day he tries out antics new
To gain our attention, 
With him around, one can't be blue, 
His love's no pretension, 

This rose within my heart's for him, 
Blooming brighter each day, 
He makes me laugh when I am grim, 
And troubles melt away, 

He was little, but now grown tall, 
Never knew how time flew, 
For him, this poem rose, I scrawl, 
For my loving nephew. 


24th March 2023

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Weston Gregory March 29, 2023 at 4:49 PM Joana, you brought me along in this piece, with a lovely discovery. It's awesome the way excitement you felt was transmit to my mind...amazing.

Subimal Sinha-Roy March 24, 2023 at 11:26 PM Very nicely penned flowing and emotional poem. Good luck, Joanna.

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2023 at 12:28 PM Aww so sweet.

Demetrios Trifiatis March 24, 2023 at 9:15 AM It is marvelous to have someone feel the pond of our heart with love for we would never get thirsty. I understand how you feel. May you both be blessed! Wonderfully written!

Daniel Turner March 24, 2023 at 7:00 AM Well written, Joanna. It's great that you have someone like that in your life (if true). It's crazy, we personalize the poems we write and readers think every one is true. Good luck girl:) Joanna Daniel March 24, 2023 at 8:11 AM This is really about my nephew, DT:) thanks for your comment:)