This Path

I hope you find What all you like As you move Along this path of life And that your walk Is straight and true I hope it all Works out for you And that you find Someone to love Someone to share All you're dreaming of Someone to take You by the hand Someone to help You along this path

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Daniel Turner

Date: 3/4/2018 9:10:00 PM

Nicely written, Mike. There is always "One" hand to hold. One simply has to reach out and grab it.

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 3/4/2018 6:44:00 PM

I agree with the comments below; this is like something out of a Hallmark card with very comforting words…Awesome Mike!~Che :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/4/2018 9:29:00 AM

This is so nice, caring and comforting Mike :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/4/2018 9:06:00 AM

I could definitely see this in a greeting card, hanging on a wall. It has the rhythm of a classic. A FAVE for me. Excellent job, Mike.