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This Old Tin Shed

The old tin shed, and all that’s inside, 
Sits alone, on the farm that is old,
With bottles and ropes and millions of spiders,
Together in dust, rust and cold,

And the windows of wood, the floor that is growing, 
And the roof that’s sort of not there,
Sit in front of the lush path that was tirelessly walked, 
By the people who used to care,

About living in the world of make it yourself, 
In a place of “make it your own”,
Where life was about building your world, 
Out of wood and nails and stone.

Today this old shed, stands withering and broke, 
This old shed, it lets out a sigh,
And every season that happily visits this shed, 
Helps this shed slowly die.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 9:26 AM
An very creative perspective given in this thoughtful poem, Lewis. Loved the ending to this well-crafted poem. Mighty fine poetry. Love and more love always.
Raynes Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 9:41 PM
Thanks Freddie, glad u enjoyed this write, thanks :)
Lawless Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 8:21 AM
Beautiful ode to a different time and a seemingly tougher generation..."where life was about building your world, out of wood annals and stone..."
Raynes Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 7:17 PM
thank you John, yep- I grew up on and still live on a farm where we often create our own buildings, machinery etc. love the old life.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Love this :) xomo
Raynes Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 7:16 PM
Thank you Maureen, I'm glad u like this write
Leiser Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 10:18 PM
Loved the emotion and description of that old tin shed, Lewis! Enjoyed :)
Raynes Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 1:58 AM
Thanks Laura, its the 1905 shed down the back of my old house when I bought the thing, thanks for ur compliment
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