This Old House

There's a few too many years on these old bones
Where my soul calls itself at home
As the lights are dimming inside of these eyes
Pulling the shades down on this house's life

With the shingles thinning on top of my head
What used to be dark is now more gray instead
With the bottom floor being aching feet
As this foundation struggles to steady me

Not to mention the pressure on these old pipes
To keep my hearts furnace burning both day and night
Which keeps the heat at a steady flow
Little wonder my hands and feet are always so cold

With my siding sagging more than it should
I'd pay for home improvements if it'd do any good
But in the meantime I'll stay bundled inside
This old house that I call my life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Hoffman Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 8:30 AM
Love the comparison of the aging human body to the old house Mike; I can relate my friend! An awesome relatable write Mike!~Che :)
Gauthier Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 7:08 AM
Delightful poem, Mike. Sounds like you're due for a bit of reno. Aren't we all! Spring will perk us all up. Well done.
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