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This Night

This night I hope will last forever, Dear. A night so warm it is like soft cashmere. The more beautiful it now is to me - being here with you. Moon of gold we see. Bright stars are glittering around that moon. I won't be leaving here any time soon. With you I sit as up at sky we gaze. Your arms go around me. I’m in a daze! Your romantic eyes whisper to me of the beauty of your tenderness and love. You light up the night with simply your smile. You’ve won me over, Darling, with your style. When finally your honeyed lips meet mine, I shine like heaven’s stars this night divine. May 8, 2023

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Date: 5/30/2023 3:45:00 PM
Lovely write Andrea....congratulation on your win.
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Date: 5/18/2023 10:26:00 AM
- Back with a big congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs
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Date: 5/18/2023 4:54:00 AM
Amazing writing. Brilliant verse. I just love this one. God bless you always and Congrats on the top win. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/16/2023 8:29:00 PM
Beautiful verse my friend, congratulations on your win. Happy belated Mother's day
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Date: 5/16/2023 7:51:00 PM
Very sensuous and beautifully romantic. Enjoyed your lovely couplets, dear Andrea. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 5/16/2023 6:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! So sweet and romantic, Andrea!
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Date: 5/16/2023 5:42:00 PM
Wow! Andrea, You penned such a well-written and romantic write. Your imagery was so dreamy as well descriptive. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/16/2023 11:51:00 AM
Andrea, Your writing is excellent and descriptive. Your winning couplet in my contest deserves earnest acclaim. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/16/2023 11:35:00 AM
Nice and romantic. Winner.
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Date: 5/9/2023 2:32:00 AM
So romantic:)
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Date: 5/8/2023 11:58:00 AM
- Beautiful and romantic, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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