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This Mother's Child

In LOVE she conceived of you. With JOY carried you. And with PRIDE birthed you. In LOVE she always conceives of you. With JOY carried within. And with PRIDE born of who you are. In LOVE always conceive of yourself and others. With JOY be carried through life. And with PRIDE in who you are Be the true expression Of this mother's heart. for SAMI AL-KHALILI-contest Heart Warmth

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Date: 12/30/2010 5:02:00 PM
A wonderful poem, Sylvia..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.
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Date: 12/21/2010 11:52:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Please read some of mine. ill do the same.
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Date: 12/21/2010 11:52:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Please read some of mine. ill do the same.
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Date: 12/11/2010 8:40:00 PM
Sylvia,this is a warm picture of a mother.A mother truly passes through the feelings you described.Good luck
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Date: 12/10/2010 12:55:00 PM
The piece is filled with LOVE. That's how it ought to be at this season of the year. This is a poem, though, for ALL seasons. Big luck in the contest. Love, Dave
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Date: 12/10/2010 10:07:00 AM
i LOVED reading your poem. it was a JOY for me how you took PRIDE in this piece of excellent work.
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Date: 12/10/2010 9:25:00 AM
Hi all thank you for your lovely comments.I have edited my poem back to how I originally wrote it.I feel the rhythm is better.Thank you for the support on the other version.I am so grateful for all your encouragement.Love June(S)
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Date: 12/8/2010 9:03:00 PM
Awesome advice June, wishing you all the best for the contest.. Hope your week has been a great one thus far ;-) Wilma
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Date: 12/8/2010 5:18:00 AM
I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us June. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/8/2010 3:43:00 AM
Nice touchy write on the mother's love, Sylvia
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Date: 12/8/2010 12:21:00 AM
Your children are lucky to have such a wise and loving mother, Sylvia. I'm sure this will do very well in Sami's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/7/2010 7:54:00 PM
Very good advice for our children. Thank you very much for your comment on my newest piece.
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