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This Morning At February End

As the apricot sun rises, In the hollow creek rise flows like fog Biting cold surrounds me Shivering happens from my toes up The warmth of the house's interior Invites me to come in Even though duty awaits the housewife A day of ordinary begins
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Kerr Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 6:01 PM
Hi Sara Thank you so very much for your reflections on Mirror On Eros. This work of yours is very atmospheric with divine scene capture. Precise description of morning weather Howard
Kendrick Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 5:42 AM
Thank you, Howard. I can only write about what touches my life. We write what we know. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 11:12 AM
I really like this. Nothing like the comfort of home
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 4:15 PM
Got that right, Andrea. No matter how humble there is no place like home. Thanks for your kindness. Sara K
Onclaud Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 9:31 AM
a beautiful kind of ordinary this one , sara...i like how ciear and vigorous your imagery is...huggs
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 4:14 PM
Thank you, Nette. Your comments are always appreciated and so uplifting. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 5:46 AM
Beautiful description. Lovely picture.
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 7:32 AM
Thank you, Victor. Outside as the sun was rising to let the dog out. Freezing my toes and hands off. Sara K
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